just few days back
got past the rush hour
had to blend-in
and so was relaxing...
got a call.. got fret!!!
thoughts were empty
left with no choice
but looked up to heavens
"belief" was the reply!
soon I started the drive
smirking at all the faces I knew
with hope in my heart
and poise in my look
a mail chain calling for help
with time running out fast
kept my fingers crossed
...greeted with benevolence
and astounding willingness
tears ran through my heart
smiles thrived at last
a little relieved I was...
never knew how to thank
your push... hearty blessings
your concern... your love
helping my friend in need
brought back light to a diminishing shadow!
I owe you for eternity!
got past the rush hour
had to blend-in
and so was relaxing...
got a call.. got fret!!!
thoughts were empty
left with no choice
but looked up to heavens
"belief" was the reply!
soon I started the drive
smirking at all the faces I knew
with hope in my heart
and poise in my look
a mail chain calling for help
with time running out fast
kept my fingers crossed
...greeted with benevolence
and astounding willingness
tears ran through my heart
smiles thrived at last
a little relieved I was...
never knew how to thank
your push... hearty blessings
your concern... your love
helping my friend in need
brought back light to a diminishing shadow!
I owe you for eternity!
2 comments:
Gautam, hats off to u man!!!! Really touching lines that bring tears at the onset and a smile @ the end for the reader.
Very gud work, keep it up :)
Hey Sunny, I am truly impressed by the depth of the feelings you had experienced!! These words could not have captured the emotions so finely unless they were intense and true. I see this poem has traveled straight from the depths of your heart to the tips of your fingers...Nice one ra
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